Feedback and review

So far I think my work is coming on nicely but very steadily. I think that more contextual research also needs to happen to. I believe my book is very easy to read and takes you on a journey down Tib St, however it could be a lot more adventure. I feel I need to begin thinking outside the box a bit more both with materials and the subject. By doing this I think ill find the progression of my work a lot more natural than forced.

When looking through others sketch books its clear mine needs more of an injection of colour and confidence when committing to a picture. I liked how it was clear in others book that they were experimenting and that it wasn’t important to replicate the object. It also been very clear I need more contextual research in order to push my work on and maybe follow a new direction. I need to begin doing this by researching any history on Tib St and begin looking at contemporary artists that my work relates too.

My work is very clearly about Tib St which is present all the way thought however I’m not sure how closely it relates to the sleuths spies and lies brief. I think I need to begin to look more in depth on what could lead to. However I do feel my recent work is slowly getting there as I have begun to look more at marks and hidden potential then actual objects.

When I got feedback from other students about my work I felt it helped give me a bit more confidence over the outcome of my pieces as it got really good constructive comments.